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译者标点符号错误的编辑反馈:基于编辑手稿的描述研究

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标点符号是译本独立成篇的基本要素之一.与译文内容校对不同,译文标点符号校对不以对等为标准,而以目的语规范为导向.本文基于三部译著的校对手稿,系统标注、统计与分析了编辑对译稿标点符号的修改反馈,发现逗号和句号是编辑校对最频繁的标点符号,其中更正频次高于增补和删除,这反映出译者误用标点多于多用和少用标点.在标点更正中,逗号主要被改为顿号、句号和破折号,句号主要被改为逗号.此外,括号、双引号、连接号被校对的数量也较多,括号校对主要为中括号改为小括号,双引号校对以增补为主,连接号校对主要为半字线与一字线的相互更正.分析表明,译者要么过度使用体现汉语句法特征的标点符号,要么受英语渗透影响忠实复制原文标点符号,要么相对原文增加不规范的标点符号.
Editors'feedback of translators'punctuation errors:a descriptive editor's feedback of the translators'misuse of punctuation based on editors'proofreading manuscripts
Punctuation is a basic element of an independent text.Different from the content proofreading of the translation vision,the punctuation in the target text is proofread according to the target language norms instead of the standard of equivalence.Based on the proofreading manuscripts of three translated books,this paper systematically annotates,calculates,and analyzes editors'rectification of punctuation in targeted text.It is found that comma and period are rectified the most frequently with more correction than addition and reduction,indicating the translators'more misuse of punctuation than overuse or omission of it.In punctuation correction,comma is usually changed into dunhao,period,and em dash while period into comma.Moreover,bracket,double quotation mark,and en dash are also frequently rectified.Bracket rectification is usually represented by the change of square bracket into parentheses.Double quotation marks tend to be added.And en dash rectification is featured by the interchange between short en dash and long en dash.These findings above reveal that the translators tend to overuse punctuation with typical Chinese syntax feature,replicate source text's punctuation influenced by its English influence or add some abnormal punctuation that the source text is not required.

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郑剑委

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福州大学 外国语学院,福建 福州 350108

标点符号 标点符号翻译 校对手稿 翻译校对 标点误用

国家社会科学基金重大项目福州大学科研启动项目湖北省教育厅科学研究计划项目

20&ZD312511186B2021087

2024

西安电子科技大学学报(社会科学版)
西安电子科技大学

西安电子科技大学学报(社会科学版)

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影响因子:0.35
ISSN:1008-472X
年,卷(期):2024.34(2)